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Write the next verse

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Okay so I got bored. Really bored. In this boredom I decided to write a short little rhyme that sounds like it could match a song. 

 

The aim of this forum game is to carry on the song while following it's rhythm and following the rules.

 

Rules are as follows:

 

No names are to be included

It's a story between a man (you) and one woman.

You both are married, but not to each other.

You must follow the rhythm.

It will not become a rap or a diss towards anyone

Each 2 lines have to rhyme.

 

https://soundcloud.com/valatore/rythym-for-raid/s-pvc5P

 

So the rhyme? HERE IT IS:

 

She's turned off the lights and locked the door

She pushed you on the bed and pounced from the floor
She's got a husband and you have a wife
Could this destroy what you've called a life?
You know what's next and you don't want more
But then you look over and see what's in store
She takes off your shirt and says take off the rest
Then she stripteases as she takes off her dress
She's all yours now and then she said it
Looked you straight in the eyes and said "I know you from Reddit".
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She's turned off the lights and locked the door

She pushed you on the bed and pounced from the floor
She's got a husband and you have a wife
Could this destroy what you've called a life?
You know what's next and you don't want more
But then you look over and see what's in store
She takes off your shirt and says take off the rest
Then she stripteases as she takes off her dress
She's all yours now and then she said it
Looked you straight in the eyes and said "I know you from Reddit".

 

You've got no credit.

You don't know her from Reddit

You can't call a taxi

You can't have a pasty

A pasty filled with drugs

A pasty filled with slugs

Truly something that will make you throw up

You go and grab a cup

You decide to hit her over the head

She's now unconscious so you put her in bed

you open the window, just to find who's there

There stands a man, and a 7 foot bear

They ask you 'what's up?'

But that bear looks tough

You shut the window

To find the bimbo

She's awake now

so she starts a row

She asks you why you hit her

so you simply say you're bitter

Best excuse you know

She then decides to break your left toe

Truly something you shouldn't know

As she threatens you with her claws

She says she'll scratch you even more

you get confused, and look for a scratch

to find on your ass, fly, and a stash

You quickly run

you scream 'I'm done'

You fling open the front door

to find the man, and bear from before

they ask you what's going on

as the girl exclaims 'I've got a gun'

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She's turned off the lights and locked the door

She pushed you on the bed and pounced from the floor

She's got a husband and you have a wife

Could this destroy what you've called a life?

You know what's next and you don't want more

But then you look over and see what's in store

She takes off your shirt and says take off the rest

Then she stripteases as she takes off her dress

She's all yours now and then she said it

Looked you straight in the eyes and said "I know you from Reddit"

You open your eyes in shock

Both of you then check the clock

There's still time to log in

Browsing on reddit now begins

Hours spent on csgo pages

Reading posts that must have took ages

Love grows as you two campaign

Others agree with lowering the prices again

The morning arrives with the sun

Both of you had a great deal of fun

Don't recall being so sweaty

Didn't talk about it to avoid seeming petty

You need to get back to your wife

Still glad that you can keep your regular life

She looks at you with an odd smile

Then warps into a track as long as a mile

You're horrified as you everything has changed

Seeing random colors seem strange

Pain runs through your body

Thoughts going through your mind that are naughty

Everything fades to black

You then discover that you're back

Coldness surrounds you on every side

Emotions now range rather wide

Attempting to get up causes you pain

"Continue", says your brain

You hobble over to the lights

Every step feels like a cage fight

Upon flickering them on you learn something weird

Realization hits upon seeing a scene you feared

The bathtub is full of red ice

Wooden floor is walked on by filthy mice

The mirror is shattered, but you can still see

Sight of you wants to make you flee

There's a large slash in your gut

You slowly mouth the word, "What"

A small shove against the door breaks it down

The room you walked into is full of depressed clowns

They tell you to join the guilt

Suddenly feels like you're wilt

You try to go back into the bathroom

Only to find it a village of mushrooms

Tiny blue people everywhere

Find yourself only able to stare

They then turn to you

Creepily saying that everything is through

The houses explode into shades of red

Contemplation starts on if you're alive or dead

Is this a dream influenced by your immense regret

Or simply fulfilling a past life's debt

The red swallows you whole

All the shades turn into charcoal

Blackness welcomes you once more

You open and walk through the chilling door

Sunlight hits your eyes as they open

Was this dream an omen?

At the other side of your bed she laid

She gets up after noticing that you prayed

You say you can't do this

She replied that you two already did and it was bliss

Confusion hits since you don't remember

Body continues to tremor

Did you forcefully block out everything to not feel ashamed?

Make up a false situation to avoid taking the blame?

It worked through your subconscious though

Oh how it put on such a wonderful show

Everything in your insane dreams now explained

You know that there was nothing you gained

She asks you if you were alright

Unaware that you tried not to scream with all your might

You like her without a doubt

But there's still your wife to think about

Unsure as what next you should do

Searching through the internet may give an useful clue

Good luck to whoever is next and I skipped Fedzor's since he didn't follow the rules :dave:

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Good luck to whoever is next  :dave:

holy

thx admins

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

fuck

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