[WiP] mp_deathrun_void

[Zack 100]

What's up guys, just decided to make a thread on this, to get multiple suggestions from everybody. I've been working on this map on and off for about a year. The map is about 60% finished, only because I plan on redoing most of the traps to be unique, and fun. The endrooms include: Bounce, Sniper, Race, Surf, Bumper Car, Random, Tag, and Assault. I've been told it looks a bit like the map Terror, because of the texture scheme. It plays different then terror, so you know. There is 4 sections in the map, from Pink, to Blue, to Red, to Yellow. Green is the ending. Like I said, i'm looking for ideas and criticism, I don't want to hear any bullshit like, "wow a floating map, stop mapping idiot." It's my map, get over it, it's supposed to be the way it is. Here are some screenshots:

 

Radiant Screenshots:

 

(PS: Traps are highlighted/selected and in white. I assume you will know what they do. They're being changed anyways)

 

Pink Section:

 

 

 

Blue Section:

 

 

 

 

 

Red Section:

 

 

 

 

Yellow Section:

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Green Section: (Ending)

 

 

 

 

 

I might update with in-game screenshots tomorrow, but for now, here's the radiant screenshots.

[GrapesFTW 8]

Seems alright, i remember playing it a while ago cx

Anyways, i would like to see the screenshots in game :D

[Scrubz 12]

Wow looks good Zack :D 

[Cat 290]

Change "old" to "classic", just seems like it fits better. Map looks nice imo. I was never very good at mapping so I'm afraid I can't give you much advice, except for make the traps a tad more unique, but you've already stated that within your original post. 

 

 

Also, don't forget to add reflection probes before you finish!

[fearz 134]

Remove bounces, unless that bounce is a simply sprint jump. I like the sound of your end games! I MUST PLAY THEM

[~Budzy~ 661]

;___; y u no mention the first like 10 brushes I made ;__; :foreveralone: and your 1 year I hella short. Void (server) was made in october time. And that was when this map was started by me. I Ofc became too lazy to work on it anymore :dumb: anyway. October>June 8 months :okay:

Anyway, looking nice since I last played it.

[jwofles 1009]

Looks like terror :troll:

 

Nah it looks awesome man!

[DeadEcho 225]

It looks cool, cant wait to play on it.

[siikdude 240]

I remember playing this

[Gabe 64]

Looks really nice, reminds me a lot of terror :D and terror is an awesome map :awesome:

[iMtroll 1084]

Bad map, go suicide

[NNJ 130]

floating brushes :(

[jwofles 1009]

Bad map, go suicide

braxi hacked troll's account guys!

 

OT -

no xmodels = no likey

[Sentrex 785]

 xmodels = no likey

I guess you'll likey this then :dumb:

[Beatthat 423]

Looks pretty good on the screens, hope you add some unique things to the map. 

[Zack 100]

Bad map, go suicide

What's up guys, just decided to make a thread on this, to get multiple suggestions from everybody. I've been working on this map on and off for about a year. The map is about 60% finished, only because I plan on redoing most of the traps to be unique, and fun. The endrooms include: Bounce, Sniper, Race, Surf, Bumper Car, Random, Tag, and Assault. I've been told it looks a bit like the map Terror, because of the texture scheme. It plays different then terror, so you know. There is 4 sections in the map, from Pink, to Blue, to Red, to Yellow. Green is the ending. Like I said, i'm looking for ideas and criticism, I don't want to hear any bullshit like, "wow a floating map, stop mapping idiot." It's my map, get over it, it's supposed to be the way it is.

[iMtroll 1084]

I was joking, being a BraXi.