[WIP] mp_dr_mila

[sxk 243]

Hey,

The past 3 days I have been working on my first ever cod4 (deathrun) map that I would like to show you.

 

Here are some images:

 

Spawn

 

First floor

 

Second floor 

 

I don't know if I'm going to keep this map name. Couldn't really think of a name so I named it Mila.

 

Give me some feedback on things I could improve please.

 

;)

 

[Anti 1307]

While deathrun maps can have bounces, it would be a good idea not to have too many (Makes it feel like CJ)

Invisible and rotating traps are a bit dull

You don't have to make something as complex as the claw from oxidation, but some twist to common traps would be refreshing

The map already has support for some of the bounces

Perhaps support as well for the floating platforms for consistency

For a first map, certainly textured better than some other nubs' ^^

The first floor has blue and the second floor has red, so should call it mp_dr_hotncold with Katy Perry's song constantly playing since it fits your love of famous people who happen to be female and the colors so far :troll:

[Zack 100]

you mean codjumper

[jwofles 1009]

What's your theme.

[sxk 243]

What's your theme.

Doesnt really have a theme, that's why I couldnt think of a name

[OwO 110]

1. Less Bounces

2. More creativity

3. More spots, where player needs to show his skills (climb, smooth jumps, timing)

4. More details

[~Budzy~ 661]

agree with everything apart from this

 

'. More spots, where player needs to show his skills (climb, smooth jumps, timing)' 

 

this just sounds like a map should be made for skilled players

 

fuck that 

[Kratos 326]

Non skilled players that don't know what a strafe is, might have some problems trying to get past the bounces in the second room

 

I know you are not finished with the map but will it have endrooms? 

[Bandit 140]

Looks really fun

 

I agree that there should be a few more traps and less bounces

 

Very nice for being your first map

[siikdude 240]

Make a theme about mila

[Synd 309]

mila is ugly

Map looks nice, recommend making at least one unique-ish trap.
(But synd! Shipment didn't have any unique traps!)
Shut up consciounse you have no say in what I type.

Anyways, nice map, looks good, and hope it turns out well.
(No it doesn't)
Shut the fk up

(Ur fkin losing your mind synd)

i know right

[siikdude 240]

Yo gonna take that stefan

[Spencer 87]

Map looks nice, recommend making at least one unique-ish trap.

 

This is some good advice, one unique trap would be pretty cool imo.  ^_^

 

Map also looks pretty nice too considering its your first map 

[sxk 243]

I know you are not finished with the map but will it have endrooms? 

 

Yes.

[Caspa 277]

Less Bounces.

 

Jumps that beginners can do.

 

Creative Traps.

 

And for gods sake, pick a better name for the map| Mila is ugly :D

 

Besides the bounces and strafes, looks like a map with a lot of potential! 

 

(Also, only 2 floors or more? :D)

[sxk 243]

Less Bounces.

 

Jumps that beginners can do.

 

(Also, only 2 floors or more? :D)

 

I removed the 2nd trap completely and am doing the second floor all over.

 

I have 3 floors planned

[OwO 110]

Stefan, you maybe thought that we are criticize your map too much, but i wanna say no, we are trying to help you to create something more than just a map, the map that will be popular, so don't give up, cheers :)

[sxk 243]

Stefan, you maybe thought that we are criticize your map too much, but i wanna say no, we are trying to help you to create something more than just a map, the map that will be popular, so don't give up, cheers :)

 

Don't really see it as criticism, just things I could improve

 

Thanks ;D

[Speedex 63]

Looks good for a first map. Only the map is a bit empty imo.

[NeCroN 0]

Cuz there's a lot of bounces it seems a little like cj but good for a first map.

 

And what OwO said "More spots, where player needs to show his skills (climb, smooth jumps, timing)"

and less bounces :)