mp_dr_cliffside

[Speedex 63]

Hey all,

 

Sketched this map when I was bored yesterday, decided to make it in radiant and it didnt look that bad so I continued making it. If you wondered what happened to my other wip map, I trashed it because I didn't know how to finish it :/

 

Some screens:

http://gyazo.com/90b1ba053f2f888af38d018b94c5e556

http://gyazo.com/378e412f3039616cda1fe0a10f852888

http://gyazo.com/5648721b61f7f10b2f0c07f2187543a0

http://gyazo.com/9d74c5a0ad09a5b5057c11f9735412fd

 

As always, suggestions and improvements are welcome!

 

-Speedex

[jwofles 1009]

it looks really pretty, but more rocks :dave:

[Synd 309]

Nice alpha blending c:

[sxk 243]

Looks sexy

 

Make it have endrooms this time pls

[Purity 288]

Looks like a good work in progress, keep us updated as you go mate n good luck with it :D

[Beatthat 423]

Nice WIP, would like to see some unique traps and endrooms

[Spencer 87]

Nice work! Looks very nice and I like the textures  ^_^

[Kratos 326]

I really like it, looks unique

 

You are now in my favorite mapper list :)  

[BosnianArmy 517]

DAYUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM the details are real :dave:

 
Anyways, the details are great and looks very nice :) Keep up the good work! if you want any help I am glad to help you out, I learned my mistakes at mapping and know what to do, thanks to this community :)

Well first what Waffles said, more rocks xD. Second is, add xmodels to the sides where you can't reach and add prefrabs where you can reach so that it looks more realistic. Also the walls you can blend it, make it littleeee more dirty.

I got already a freaking nice idea with this map :dave:, you should have 2 levels in this map and that is this -------> When you finish the first level you will see a black large path and you need to open it orrr teleport it trough the second level and it's snowing there xD. Just like in the map Apocalypse (wow long time ago that I played that map).
 
I hope this is a good idea :)

[Bandit 140]

Looks really good

 

Good job on the mapping

 

Hope we can play it soon  ;)

[Synd 309]

Like previously stated, I like the alpha blending and the texture selection.

 

I feel like the map kind of looks like its set in the early morning, so some cool mist coming off the water and rising into the map a little bit, as well as a slight breeze ambient sound, and maybe some effects coming off of the trees that look like leaves are falling.

 

I know it looks peaceful and all, but being on a cliff side, to me atleast, would feel extremely dangerous. How about a trap that makes the floor crumble below you and then you plummet to your death? :D

[Speedex 63]

Like previously stated, I like the alpha blending and the texture selection.

 

I feel like the map kind of look like its set in the early morning, so some cool mist coming off the water and rising into the map a little bit, as well as a slight breeze ambient sound, and maybe some effects coming off of the trees that look like leaves are falling.

 

I know it looks peaceful and all, but being on a cliff side, to me atleast, would feel extremely dangerous. How about a trap that makes the floor crumble below you and then you plummet to your death? :D

I like the ideas of the mist coming of the water and the breezing sounds! And a trap that makes people plummet to their death is already in the map. (trap1)

 

DAYUMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM the details are real :dave:

 

Anyways, the details are great and looks very nice :) Keep up the good work! if you want any help I am glad to help you out, I learned my mistakes at mapping and know what to do, thanks to this community :)

Well first what Waffles said, more rocks xD. Second is, add xmodels to the sides where you can't reach and add prefrabs where you can reach so that it looks more realistic. Also the walls you can blend it, make it littleeee more dirty.

I got already a freaking nice idea with this map :dave:, you should have 2 levels in this map and that is this -------> When you finish the first level you will see a black large path and you need to open it orrr teleport it trough the second level and it's snowing there xD. Just like in the map Apocalypse (wow long time ago that I played that map).

 

I hope this is a good idea :)

I already was considering a second island (not as big as the first one). I also like idea to make the second island winter themed but Im not sure if I gonna add that.

 

And yes I will add more rocks to the map! ;-;

 

-Speedex

[Speedex 63]

New Update:

http://gyazo.com/78cd9f434cb557841920bd096a39a6f2

Tank only shoots forwards atm, trying to make it target people like the last trap on lovelyplanet.

http://gyazo.com/5dd6e93f07841f974b7a0f750da2aaa4

 

-Speedex

Edited July 15, 2015 by Speedex

[jwofles 1009]

if you're putting rocks where the fence is, make the fence broken because fences don't through rocks and, for the second image, either don't make the edge of that a vertical side or add more foilage and bushes to cover up.

 

Other than that everything is perfect, when I give two criticisms, that means there is nothing else wrong with you map- it's great. Just wanted to make sure in case anyone thinks I'm a dick :dave: 

[Speedex 63]

Like this?

http://gyazo.com/10b562f13dbfefbd24c20679cdcd136f

 

-Speedex

[jwofles 1009]

Eh, don't worry actually, just add foilage at the bottom but don't forget to alpha blend grass and dirt onto it c:

[Speedex 63]

First island is done, started making the second one!

 

http://gyazo.com/2f60429fe0917738275c3550d470c991

http://gyazo.com/b73e2b095d8a54da7a49d47894eccb63

 

-Speedex

[jwofles 1009]

Is that rope a custom texture?

[Sentrex 785]

Is that rope a custom texture?

Kinda looks like a stretched wooden texture

[Speedex 63]

Ye its a wooden texture

[jwofles 1009]

Ye its a wooden texture

There's like some carpet texture that looks okay as a rope but you should make a custom texture :P

[SPi 141]

Not bad at all. I like it. Though a few more polygons would make it look a lot better.

[Shield 2]

The 3 Trap i think this with the panzer. Where the panzer shot.  There is no time to pass this part, you must crawl there to pass this part, and after a time there come move or you will get spectator, and if you crawl the smoke at this fx place drop the fps to 7 or 10, andall is laggy. Let Jumpers more time to pass it.

 

At 1 Trap if a part of the bridge fall down, the players dontdie , they first die if they jump out of bridge.

[Dolph1n 130]

Looks awesome, has a great setting imo. Good luck :D

[Speedex 63]

The 3 Trap i think this with the panzer. Where the panzer shot.  There is no time to pass this part, you must crawl there to pass this part, and after a time there come move or you will get spectator, and if you crawl the smoke at this fx place drop the fps to 7 or 10, andall is laggy. Let Jumpers more time to pass it.

 

At 1 Trap if a part of the bridge fall down, the players dontdie , they first die if they jump out of bridge.

Fixed both bugs, gonna upload it to modb this afternoon! Thanks for reporting it.