mp_dr_onsea

[*V* 35]

Hello everyone,well idk wat to say but here is some details:

 

Map name: mp_dr_onsea

 

Map size: medium 

 

Traps: 10

 

Difficulty: medium

 

secrets: 2 secrets rooms.

 

End rooms: Sniper, Weapon. Jump.

 

 

Download: http://www.mediafire.com/download/x7js9ev698bbbac/mp_dr_onsea.rar

 

http://i.imgur.com/qZCE2Ib.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/6zjKRJY.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/81vjAJm.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/7ASQ8Op.jpg

 

appreciate any advice,Thanks 

[Dolph1n 130]

Looks like a nice map from the screenshots, I'll try it out in devmap :)

[Lossy 1968]

Looks like a nice map, maybe you should of made the water longer so people can't tell if it's the edge or not instead of a big massive wall, also FIT your water otherwise it's going to look pixelated like your water does and it can irritate people eyes. Don't know how to do that? Select brush, press S and click FIT then click ok.

 

But you can also make nice hilly terrians with a river going out to fit your skybox as well.

 

Also remove some lights, i see you have like 518251925219 200 radius lights around your map, make correct lightning in your map, use the skybox sun files & a vision file. Correct lightning in your map is IMPORTANT.

[jwofles 1009]

the textures make no sense and it's a little blocky but it looks like it has a cool layout.

[*V* 35]

Thanks for the advice,will try that.

[Kratos 326]

Looks great on the screenshot! 

 

I will try it out in devmap 

[TKOD. 5]

Looks good nice job  :)

[*V* 35]

ok edited.

[Darmuh 1090]

the textures don't seem to work well here :S

It's obvious where they repeat and just looks kinda icky. I'd play around with the different things you can do to fix that or at least cover it up.

 

Not sure if the screens are up-to-date of course just giving some feedback from them.

[Speedex 63]

Looks interesting, maybe add some natural surroundings instead of a brick wall.

[BosnianArmy 517]

Looks quite good, but the whole map is with the same texture. A bit boring but the map looks good :3