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hello again,well,this's my 3rd map so far,tried to make all custom textures and imported some models,anyway it has 10 traps and the difficulty is medium and with sniper and jump and weapon rooms and it has 2 secrets.hope you like it ;p

 

 

 

download link: https://mega.co.nz/#!PksViDAB!XUfEMbakfHCKulWdgG4ZJWPeb-nACYm3CT0vWkOvv9s

 

appreciated any feedback.Thanks 

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mp_deathrun_iceage :dave:

 

Anyways, map looks good

 

At 5:01, please try to do something more original/unique with that trap

 

Be it having the sharks jump up themselves and eat jumpers on the ice "bridge" or the bridge break apart and pieces to stand on slowly "melt" and get smaller

 

The spikes are over used and seem rather out of place

 

http://gyazo.com/1dd45deca9246591626dca0ecd20b825

 

Could have something covering the bottom there as well instead of a flat texture, perhaps ice spikes or shards?

 

http://gyazo.com/820a672c05edb0169a711be6e5c2706f

 

Bottom of this could have some snow mounts or something along those lines to add some additional dimension 

 

http://gyazo.com/701b8ac68f8b53b035ac7e2b2766a883 (1:36)

 

Noticed at this part you had some difficulties jumping up there, perhaps have it be a bit lower

 

Some supports for such would also be better 

 

Most of the traps are unique and seem rather interesting

 

Look forward to it

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Looks really nice, but that XP though... people will just whore the fuck out of it.. 

 

ok then,will do something apas

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That maps looks so nice, good balance of asthetics and gameplay. Shame it has same old rooms though.

Btw, how the heck did you make that amazing looking last area?!

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This is certainly a great map, I like it a lot *v* nice job :)

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Map looks amazing! Great work ;) +1

 

The only thing that I would suggest changing is the amount of XP coins 

 

Map has a great atmosphere and I can't wait to play it in the future 

 

-Dolph1n :sir:

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The map looks excellent! Really detailed and creative. Hope to play the map soon

 

Great job *V*

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My server crashes when I load up the map.

Console:

6db5a8cde0c404427cf068ccfb1b310f.png

 

Probably a plugin's fault. Trying to fix it.

 

Edit: Disabled every plugin, I still get the same error. Can someone help me? The same happens for a few other maps too.

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ok,thanks for the feedback,updated download link

 

I have removed some acorns and no 50 xp acorns only 10 xp,and added an obstacle in the second cave with snow eff,and modified some parts and trap 9.

 

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At :40

 

Perhaps instead of those out of place spikes/combs coming from the side, how about "icicles" falling from the ceiling down to where the platforms fall

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My server crashes when I load up the map.

Console:

6db5a8cde0c404427cf068ccfb1b310f.png

 

Probably a plugin's fault. Trying to fix it.

 

Edit: Disabled every plugin, I still get the same error. Can someone help me? The same happens for a few other maps too.

Happens to me too.

 

Dont think its server side, probably script error in gsc file.

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Happens to me too.

Dont think its server side, probably script error in gsc file.

deleted that acorn btw.
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My server crashes when I load up the map.

Console:

6db5a8cde0c404427cf068ccfb1b310f.png

 

Probably a plugin's fault. Trying to fix it.

 

Edit: Disabled every plugin, I still get the same error. Can someone help me? The same happens for a few other maps too.

 

yeh found that acorn and deleted it,it was under the map -.- , anyway should be fixed now thanks for the report.

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The error seems like there were entities in the map using the same targetname as the acorn in the error that weren't created together, for anyone here that didn't know what was causing it. No need to disable any plugins or anything to fix that error

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The error seems like there were entities in the map using the same targetname as the acorn in the error that weren't created together, for anyone here that didn't know what was causing it. No need to disable any plugins or anything to fix that error

 

I know,but saw that no need for it anyway since there was many acorns in the map ;p

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Don't play Deathrun very often but I might just take the 3 hours needed to download what looks an awesome map with loads of effort put into it.

Anyways, I'm no expert... but I can safely say that you can be proud of such a map and I can't wait to try it.

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